Seriously go read it, the story is fantastic and well thought out; it's going to take a LOT to top it. Overall I give it a 10/10, +1 for including Rainbow Dash, +1 for including ponies, +1 for well thoughts, +1 for the suspense being built waiting for those final chapters, +1 for introducing an epic OC pony. Finishing with a HUGE 15/10. It's going to take a godly book to take this story down...
Well done Pen Stroke and Batty Gloom. The updates took a bit longer than usual but that's what always kept me waiting and guessing. The story overall is fantastic, you know what? Have a link to go read it RIGHT NOW http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/07/story-past-sins.html
Seriously go read it, the story is fantastic and well thought out; it's going to take a LOT to top it. Overall I give it a 10/10, +1 for including Rainbow Dash, +1 for including ponies, +1 for well thoughts, +1 for the suspense being built waiting for those final chapters, +1 for introducing an epic OC pony. Finishing with a HUGE 15/10. It's going to take a godly book to take this story down...
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