Where to start, the dynamic storyline is quite swell. Sending in tid-bits of future plot that makes sure you're paying attention while also throwing in some show canon. Even combining both season 1 and 2 was a nice touch. Now another thing is the condensing of the story, whereas Past Sins is 21[+1] chapters each having at least over 8,000 words each with a total of 176,000+ (Yes, I'm nitpicking) and where Haunting Nightmares has only 3 chapters but a quick sitting of 10,000 words a chapter with only 30,000. But the longest of stories are usually the best of stories. Anyway, enough philosophy, the story overall was pretty damned amazing, 9/10.
Yup! PenStrokePony has returned with another story (Albeit, this was put up on Equestria Daily on November last year) and this one I have to say, was pretty damn good. Where to start, the dynamic storyline is quite swell. Sending in tid-bits of future plot that makes sure you're paying attention while also throwing in some show canon. Even combining both season 1 and 2 was a nice touch. Now another thing is the condensing of the story, whereas Past Sins is 21[+1] chapters each having at least over 8,000 words each with a total of 176,000+ (Yes, I'm nitpicking) and where Haunting Nightmares has only 3 chapters but a quick sitting of 10,000 words a chapter with only 30,000. But the longest of stories are usually the best of stories. Anyway, enough philosophy, the story overall was pretty damned amazing, 9/10.
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