This nonsense would be the regular version, and the abridged version made by FiMFlamFilosophy (Celestia) [P.S, this won't be the last we see of his work]
So, let's get on with the two reviews.
Regular VersionWow... for the starting bit, I personally think Mic's a trooper for reading this all and being able to stand it. I only lasted up until the second sentence.But why would you ever expect more from a troll fic? Anyway, continuing on from the spelling, the story isn't too bad once you're able to understand it. It's still even godlier than the story to the right [I agree with Mic about super powers] and even has more memorable moments than the other. "Oh, it is becuz I am spidur nao." Wrapping this one up with a 9/10, this thing is fucking godly, go read it. | FiMFlamFilosophy's VersionBeing the abridged version, it's obviously going to be different in it's own ways. The beginning already started pretty funny, although my question is: why does Celestia have a Australian like voice? And we can never forget the Spike-abuse at 1:48, and then a few seconds later we get the scroll in binary that apparently says 'very little'. And how can we forget Spider Mac's dance that seduced Twilight Spider. But of course the little part before that with the reference to the Flutter Spider. However, I am curious as to what Spike ate during the two weeks and several days period, maybe it was all those eviction notices. Wrapping it up, overall it was pretty good considering the other version to the left. 6/10, +1 for being a funny abridged. Simple 7/10 |